The character development is so, so, so well done throughout the story. From Ana's grief at the start to becoming a fighter who wants to fight for what is right in the world to at the end her becoming a leader. Ramson from the beginning being selfish and out for himself to then learning about the world becoming selfless and wanting to make the world a better place. The character development is so good in the book its amazing 5/5
The plot development is also well done but a bit weaker in comparison to the character development but that's because there is so much going on. The plot of following Ana and discovering the truth about what happened to her parents and the reasoning behind it was really well done just wished it was clearer in places in regards to what was happening. But the feeling of chaos from the reader added to what the characters were feeling in the story which made you connect with them more 4/5
The World Development was gorgeous in this book! It's so good and really well done I loved it. It felt very realistic even though it had magic in it through the affinities which are so interesting and I love how they are incorporated into the world 5/5
The pacing was really decent felt a bit rushed towards the end but really loved it 4/5
The language was beautiful in the book there were some really poetic lines that were lovely to read. I loved that there was a glossary at the end as that was helpful.
Overall, really loved the story it got 23/25 which is 92% so 5 stars! I really loved reading it and I am looking forward to the sequel which is set up nicely at the end so 5/5- This book is amazing.
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